Sunday, June 30, 2013
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Friday, June 28, 2013
An interview with author, Rebecca Lacy!
Meet author, Rebecca Lacy!
Where are you from?
I am from So. California and am now living in Missouri.
I am from So. California and am now living in Missouri.
What inspired you to
write your first book?
My first book, which is Reinventing Holly. I wrote a novella for a Christmas present for my husband. Then I learned about NaNoWriMo and took the novella and turned it into the novel.
My first book, which is Reinventing Holly. I wrote a novella for a Christmas present for my husband. Then I learned about NaNoWriMo and took the novella and turned it into the novel.
Do you write full-time
or part-time? Part-time, but a lot of my ‘day job’
involves writing – papers, curriculum, articles, etc.
How do you balance your
writing life with your family/work life? I am so
very lucky to be self-employed. So, some days when I have a story that needs to
be written down I am able to take the time to write. Also, I am blessed to have
a husband who is my biggest fan and cheerleader. This goes beyond encouragement
to doing a lot of the household tasks so that I have the time and energy to
write. He’s very evolved!
What jobs have you held
that influence your stories?
I have owned my own company for 16 years doing training, coaching and consulting. The work that we do with clients helped to inspire one book. Also, one of the courses that I teach is about personality styles and communication preferences. This knowledge has helped me to understand the motivations and reactions of people in a variety of situation. I apply that to characters, and it makes them more realistic. It also helps me to develop characters who have very different ‘voices’ than I do. I would like to teach a class to writers on this topic. What do you think?
I think that's a great idea. Do it! Do you have a specific writing style?
I almost always write in first-person. Beyond that, I’m all over the place. I have written business related, children’s, sci-fi, women’s, and am working on a piece that is about a WWII POW camp that was located in Missouri. I write primarily about personal journeys. I recently completed a book co-authored with a friend (whom I have never met in person). It is called Wonderland Odyssey: Turning Leadership on its Hat. As the name suggests, it is based on Alice in Wonderland, and she is on a journey to become a better leader of her tea company. It is a fantasy with business related undertones that we wrote because we don’t like to read typical business books and figure there are a lot of other people who don’t either. I’ve tried several times to write a ‘normal’ business book, but I got bored and could never finish one!
How did you come up with the title?
That was an interesting process. I’m so glad that I had a great co-author with whom I work very well. We spent a lot of time brainstorming the title (but not as much as we did trying to come up with the name of Alice’s company). Wonderland had to be a part of the title because it uses characters from Alice and her company is Leaves-of-Wonderland. Odyssey because it is her journey to learn how to overcome her fears and learn many lessons along the way. The tag line is Turning Leadership on its Hat. This was included because it is about learning to be a leader and because the Mad Hatter is Alice’s nemesis.
I have owned my own company for 16 years doing training, coaching and consulting. The work that we do with clients helped to inspire one book. Also, one of the courses that I teach is about personality styles and communication preferences. This knowledge has helped me to understand the motivations and reactions of people in a variety of situation. I apply that to characters, and it makes them more realistic. It also helps me to develop characters who have very different ‘voices’ than I do. I would like to teach a class to writers on this topic. What do you think?
I think that's a great idea. Do it! Do you have a specific writing style?
I almost always write in first-person. Beyond that, I’m all over the place. I have written business related, children’s, sci-fi, women’s, and am working on a piece that is about a WWII POW camp that was located in Missouri. I write primarily about personal journeys. I recently completed a book co-authored with a friend (whom I have never met in person). It is called Wonderland Odyssey: Turning Leadership on its Hat. As the name suggests, it is based on Alice in Wonderland, and she is on a journey to become a better leader of her tea company. It is a fantasy with business related undertones that we wrote because we don’t like to read typical business books and figure there are a lot of other people who don’t either. I’ve tried several times to write a ‘normal’ business book, but I got bored and could never finish one!
How did you come up with the title?
That was an interesting process. I’m so glad that I had a great co-author with whom I work very well. We spent a lot of time brainstorming the title (but not as much as we did trying to come up with the name of Alice’s company). Wonderland had to be a part of the title because it uses characters from Alice and her company is Leaves-of-Wonderland. Odyssey because it is her journey to learn how to overcome her fears and learn many lessons along the way. The tag line is Turning Leadership on its Hat. This was included because it is about learning to be a leader and because the Mad Hatter is Alice’s nemesis.
Is there a message in your novel that you want readers to grasp? Many! Of primary importance is that most of us have fears or other things that hold us back from accomplishing our dreams. Too often fear or a feeling of inadequacy prevents us from taking a leap into the unknown. Alice is fraught with insecurities and an unwillingness to change. But as she moves down the path and learns about things that all of us deal with on a daily basis (communication, trust, goals, friendship, etc) she begins to believe in herself and becomes more supportive of others.
How much of the book is
realistic?
Well, one chapter deals with the legal team of Griffin and Mock Turtle, who spend all of their time at the Nest, the local hangout for all the ‘legal eagles,’ because they are unable to pass the bar. The situation is total fantasy, but the lesson that Alice learns on this part of her odyssey is very real. Each chapter is written in that manner.
Well, one chapter deals with the legal team of Griffin and Mock Turtle, who spend all of their time at the Nest, the local hangout for all the ‘legal eagles,’ because they are unable to pass the bar. The situation is total fantasy, but the lesson that Alice learns on this part of her odyssey is very real. Each chapter is written in that manner.
Are experiences based
on someone you know, or events in your own life?
The characters are all people who we see in real life. For example, the Duchess is the loud, overbearing Quality Control manager, and White Rabbit is the officious Production Manager. We meet these people at work and at PTA. They are everywhere. The issues that Alice faces are things that most of us will deal with at some point. One doesn’t have to be a business owner to have to learn how to deal with difficult people, or how to be more self-confident.
The characters are all people who we see in real life. For example, the Duchess is the loud, overbearing Quality Control manager, and White Rabbit is the officious Production Manager. We meet these people at work and at PTA. They are everywhere. The issues that Alice faces are things that most of us will deal with at some point. One doesn’t have to be a business owner to have to learn how to deal with difficult people, or how to be more self-confident.
What books have most
influenced your life most?
I believe it was those books that I read in early childhood that sparked my love for literature. How many pre-teens do you know who want to be a writer? I continue to be inspired by authors who have created unforgettable characters and plots. I am amazed by those who are able to transport readers to another world. I love Anne McCaffrey. Once when I was reading her Dragon series, I dreamed of Pern, the world she so vividly created in the books.
I believe it was those books that I read in early childhood that sparked my love for literature. How many pre-teens do you know who want to be a writer? I continue to be inspired by authors who have created unforgettable characters and plots. I am amazed by those who are able to transport readers to another world. I love Anne McCaffrey. Once when I was reading her Dragon series, I dreamed of Pern, the world she so vividly created in the books.
If you had to choose,
which writer would you consider a mentor? Right now,
I would say Claire Cook , author of Must Love Dogs, Time Flies, etc. The reason
is that much of my readership would be the same as hers and some of the things
that she has been able to accomplish are my dreams. Also, she seems to be a
genuinely caring person who would want to help another succeed.
What book are you reading now?
Yours! Just started The Chronicles of Koa. Moments before I started that I finished “A Princess of Mars” by Edgar Rice Burroughs (of Tarzan fame).
That's amazing! I really hope you enjoy The Chronicles of Koa. Are there any new authors that have grasped your interest? You mean besides you?? I have to admit that I’ve been reading mostly classics for the past couple years. One reason is that they are so different from my writing style that they never interrupt my creative process. Also I love the variations in language used in different times, and the richness of the prose.
Thanks! It's good to know that readers are enjoying my work! What are your current projects?
Editing (ick) Reinventing Holly, the story about a woman who is turning 50 and looking forward to new adventures…one of which is to experience physical perfection. It is set in Arizona and Tapawatu, my imaginary island chain based on Hawaii, Tahiti and a bit of India.
What book are you reading now?
Yours! Just started The Chronicles of Koa. Moments before I started that I finished “A Princess of Mars” by Edgar Rice Burroughs (of Tarzan fame).
That's amazing! I really hope you enjoy The Chronicles of Koa. Are there any new authors that have grasped your interest? You mean besides you?? I have to admit that I’ve been reading mostly classics for the past couple years. One reason is that they are so different from my writing style that they never interrupt my creative process. Also I love the variations in language used in different times, and the richness of the prose.
Thanks! It's good to know that readers are enjoying my work! What are your current projects?
Editing (ick) Reinventing Holly, the story about a woman who is turning 50 and looking forward to new adventures…one of which is to experience physical perfection. It is set in Arizona and Tapawatu, my imaginary island chain based on Hawaii, Tahiti and a bit of India.
Name one entity that
you feel supported you outside of family members.
NaNoWriMo! It was the challenge that I needed to get serious.
NaNoWriMo! It was the challenge that I needed to get serious.
Do you see writing as a
career?
Once upon a time, I wanted to be a writer. Then, somewhere along the line, I became practical, and decided to get a business degree and go to work in Corporate America. Then I opened my company (a hint that I was losing that practicality?). Those were careers. This is something special…different.
Once upon a time, I wanted to be a writer. Then, somewhere along the line, I became practical, and decided to get a business degree and go to work in Corporate America. Then I opened my company (a hint that I was losing that practicality?). Those were careers. This is something special…different.
If you had to do it all
over again, would you change anything in your latest book?
Wonderland Odyssey hasn’t been published yet, so we are still making some subtle changes.
Wonderland Odyssey hasn’t been published yet, so we are still making some subtle changes.
Do you recall how your
interest in writing originated?
My dad. He taught English and Drama, so I was exposed to literature and theatre at a very early age. We read aloud in the evenings and there was a general love of books in the house. Also, he wrote stories, plays and music, so my interest came naturally.
My dad. He taught English and Drama, so I was exposed to literature and theatre at a very early age. We read aloud in the evenings and there was a general love of books in the house. Also, he wrote stories, plays and music, so my interest came naturally.
Can you share a little of your current work with us?
Yes. Bathing Suit Hell is an excerpt of Reinventing Holly, and there are sample chapters of Wonderland Odyssey on our blog site.
Is there anything you
find particularly challenging in your writing?
Too many ideas. Not enough follow through. I’m an expressive and have a short attention span. So, that is something that I have to focus on. Also, I like things to flow smoothly in life, and sometimes that makes it difficult for me to put my characters in situations that create tension.
Too many ideas. Not enough follow through. I’m an expressive and have a short attention span. So, that is something that I have to focus on. Also, I like things to flow smoothly in life, and sometimes that makes it difficult for me to put my characters in situations that create tension.
Who is your favorite author and what is it that really strikes you about their work?
I really don’t know if I have a favorite. I mentioned Anne McCaffrey earlier, and she is certainly one of my favorites. I admire how she weaves everything together creating believable characters, interesting plots and a world so real that you feel it really exists.
Interesting! I am a McCaffrey fan as well! Do you have to travel
much concerning your book(s)?
I have had the great fortune to travel quite a bit on business, so I draw on that for my books.
I have had the great fortune to travel quite a bit on business, so I draw on that for my books.
Who designed the
covers?
Neither of them is to that point yet. I have an image in my mind for Reinventing Holly, however.
Neither of them is to that point yet. I have an image in my mind for Reinventing Holly, however.
What was the hardest
part of writing your book?
With Wonderland Odyssey, it was ensuring that the voice sounded right…not letting our ‘corporate speak’ invade. Also, because it is based on Alice in Wonderland, the voice had to reflect that as well. There were two of us who wrote. Interestingly, now when we go back and reread them, it is difficult to discern which of us wrote which chapters. With Reinventing Holly, it has been creating adequate tension.
With Wonderland Odyssey, it was ensuring that the voice sounded right…not letting our ‘corporate speak’ invade. Also, because it is based on Alice in Wonderland, the voice had to reflect that as well. There were two of us who wrote. Interestingly, now when we go back and reread them, it is difficult to discern which of us wrote which chapters. With Reinventing Holly, it has been creating adequate tension.
Did you learn anything
from writing your book and what was it? My
co-author, Susan Goldberg, and I learned so much from Alice. As I mentioned, we
have never met in person. She lives in New York and I’m in rural Missouri. That
sounds like a recipe for a disastrous collaboration, but it was near perfect.
What we learned from that process is invaluable.
Do you have any advice
for other writers?
Just write! I have heard from so many people that they want to write someday, or that they would love to but…If you want to write, just do it. Do it for yourself. I recommend NaNoWriMo to anyone who wants a kick in the pants to get started…or to finish. You don’t edit, you just write all month in November. It’s like studying for finals - it’s difficult, but you’ve got a lot of other people going through the same thing. It’s comforting to be able to commiserate with people all around the world in the challenge with you.
Just write! I have heard from so many people that they want to write someday, or that they would love to but…If you want to write, just do it. Do it for yourself. I recommend NaNoWriMo to anyone who wants a kick in the pants to get started…or to finish. You don’t edit, you just write all month in November. It’s like studying for finals - it’s difficult, but you’ve got a lot of other people going through the same thing. It’s comforting to be able to commiserate with people all around the world in the challenge with you.
Great advice, Rebecca! Do you have anything
specific that you want to say to your readers?
Thank you for reading my stuff!! I appreciate those who read the story that you put on your site. It’s fun to write, especially if I know that I’m entertaining someone.
Thank you for reading my stuff!! I appreciate those who read the story that you put on your site. It’s fun to write, especially if I know that I’m entertaining someone.
What were the challenges (research, literary, psychological, and logistical) in bringing it to life?
Probably the biggest issue with Wonderland Odyssey was time. There were two of us working on it, both of us business owners living 1000+ miles apart. So, finding time when we could get meet (virtually) a couple times a week wasn’t always easy. That was more of an issue during the editing process because in the initial writing we each wrote chapters alone, but then we edited together. Additionally, we have many characters and they each had to have their own voice and it needed to be true to the original work as much as possible. It was fun, but not always easy. A final challenge has simply been to categorize the book. It is written as a pure fiction, a fantasy at that, but the undertones are non-fiction. The next challenge is to keep building our platform to increase interest in the book.
What do you think about
e-publishing versus technical publishing?
Susan and I are trying to go the traditional route. The reason is that there are a zillion, give or take a few million, consultants who have self-published. It lacks the gravitas as a traditionally published book. Additionally, too many of them are published strictly as ‘calling cards’ as in “Hello, I’m the expert who literally wrote the book on…” We don’t want to go that route. Being a fiction, however, also makes is more challenging to find someone to take it on because it doesn’t fit into a nice, neat box.
Susan and I are trying to go the traditional route. The reason is that there are a zillion, give or take a few million, consultants who have self-published. It lacks the gravitas as a traditionally published book. Additionally, too many of them are published strictly as ‘calling cards’ as in “Hello, I’m the expert who literally wrote the book on…” We don’t want to go that route. Being a fiction, however, also makes is more challenging to find someone to take it on because it doesn’t fit into a nice, neat box.
Do you have an agent or
publisher? How did you go about finding one?
We are looking as I write. We have been identifying likely matches, and have queried a couple. We know that this isn’t a simple project that will appeal to just anyone. I’ve learned so much doing the research. There are some wonderful resources available to make this phase as painless as possible.
We are looking as I write. We have been identifying likely matches, and have queried a couple. We know that this isn’t a simple project that will appeal to just anyone. I’ve learned so much doing the research. There are some wonderful resources available to make this phase as painless as possible.
If you could live
anywhere, where would it be?
Right where I am for a primary residence. Our gardens are my oasis. I would like to have a vacation home in San Diego, Florida or Charleston.
Right where I am for a primary residence. Our gardens are my oasis. I would like to have a vacation home in San Diego, Florida or Charleston.
If you could have any
super power, what would it be?
I believe I would pass on the super powers. I really think that they would be more trouble than they’re worth.
For More on Rebecca Lacy:
I believe I would pass on the super powers. I really think that they would be more trouble than they’re worth.
For More on Rebecca Lacy:
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Thursday, June 27, 2013
Maze- a short poem
Maze
K.N. Lee
Like a rat in a maze
Desperate to find its way
Your head leads you home
While your heart leads you astray
Wednesday, June 26, 2013
What do you do when you're stuck on a stalled manuscript?
Right now I'm working on a young adult fantasy called, Academia of the Beast. I started this back in 2010 when I took a creative writing course at the local community college. First, the words were flying across the page. It was thrilling. It was exciting.
Then...I was stuck.
Where to go? I took a long walk and listened to the Braveheart soundtrack. Listening to those Scottish bagpipes did something to me. I was filled with an incredible idea.
Do you want to know what I did?
I added a character!
He's Scottish. He's hot. He's smart and has a very cool secret.
Still, that's not enough. Simply adding a character will not always add the depth you're looking for. Guess what does. Well, at least this helped me out. I decided to write from his POV (Point of View) as well!
Voila!
A new angle on my story and an extra 20,000 words! Sweet! I know that most blogs and books recommend that you kill a character when you're stuck on a manuscript.
Sure! Why not? It does work. But for me, adding a character works just as well.
Hmmm...now that I think of it...I might need to kill a couple of characters as well. Just to shake things up. ;)
Good luck!
Prepare to have your mind blown by the awesome story of Ava in, Academia of the Beast! Coming soon!
Tuesday, June 25, 2013
A Review of Thicker Than Blood by Ginger Fox!!
5.0 out of 5 stars
Teasing and Twisting Tales
June 25, 2013
By Ginger Fox
Format:Paperback|Amazon Verified Purchase
I knew after her first short story in a creative writing class that
K.N. Lee was going to publish. With each story, she brings the dark and
the bizarre. K.N. Lee weaves twisted tales via her strong women
characters. The settings are eerie, the characters are tantalizing, and
the plots are twisted. The stories are brief, but they create a desire
from readers for more works from this author. She has a knack for
leaving a story open for interpretation and ending with a twist. I look
forward to reading more from her.
Sunday, June 23, 2013
Writing Challenge With Author, Lawrence BoarerPitchford!!
The Challenge:
In 3000 words or less, write about a girl who finds a body in her basement. When she tells her parents, it's no longer there...
The Result:
Occultus Sepulchrum
By
Lawrence BoarerPitchford
I’ve had the
unfortunate experience of seeing a dead body three times in my life. One
evening, when I was thirteen and getting some laundry from the basement, it first
happened. I could see it in darkness, lying on its side, near the drain, and
the dryer. My heart raced, and my mouth became instantly dry. I can tell you –
honestly, I never ran so fast up the stairs in my life. I ran through the
doorway, picked up a splinter in my finger from the jam as I passed, skidded to
a halt on the white linoleum and turned back to look at the dark doorway. Was
it a dead body, or worse, a monster?
My mother came
into the room and looked down at me, “Sheila, close that door. Were you born in
a barn?”
“But mom – there’s
something down there!”
“What something?”
I hesitated, “A body I think…”
“Don’t be silly. You saw a pile of your father’s old
clothes bunched up. I assure you there is no body in the basement.” She went to
the refrigerator and took out a bottle of milk, which instantly began to sweat,
and put it on the table. “I said close that door,” she indicated with her eyes.
I slowly went
over, put my hand on the knob, and pushed it shut. It clicked into place, and I
turned the lock. There was a body down there, but I wasn’t going to go back
down there without an escort. I was quite familiar with horror movies and how
they ended up. I was sure that thing in the basement was just waiting to kill me. My God, I thought, it could
try to come up in the night. It might slip under my bed, and reach up while I
sleep and grab my feet… I’d better tuck in my sheets.
After dinner we
all went into the living room and sat. My father insisted that we all read, and
not watch the ridiculously large flat screen television they bought for
Christmas. This night, I decided to forget the collection of works published by
Alfred Hitchcock, and instead open an old Agatha Christy work. Just as I was on
page eighty two, my father said something that stunned me.
“So, you saw a
body down in the basement today?” His voice was thick with fatherly knowing.
“Yes,” I said
stunned.
“Shall we have a
look?” His eyes sparkled as he said this.
“Okay,” I looked
over at my mother who was smirking.
“Come on, before
we have to go to bed.” He stood up, and we all followed him into the kitchen and
to the basement door. He unlocked it and looked over at me and smiled with a
sardonic expression. “Let’s get this done,” and he started down.
He flipped the
black light switch on and the bare bulb at the bottom of the stairs illuminated
the end of the basement and the junk that was strewn about. The wood creaked,
and the whole stairs swayed with us on it. Getting to the basement floor, my
father looked around the cement room. Nothing. No clothes on the floor. No
body. Just old junk, a peddle car, boxes of old toys, skis, some tools, and
three empty coolers, one stacked on top of the other at the far corner.
“Take a good
look,” father said. “If you find a body, I’ll eat my hat.”
There was none.
When I was
nineteen I returned from college for the summer. My parents were now traveling.
I had my friend Tina staying with me that night. That evening as we were
watching an old episode of Fawlty Towers on channel twelve, there was a tremendous
sound that resonated through the floorboards. Tina jumped from the couch, “What
the hell was that?”
“Sounded like
something fell over in the basement.” I looked at Tina and she was truly
scared. “Don’t worry. My parents store a ton of junk down there, and every once
in a while, it topples,” I said. “Come on and we’ll check it out.” I went into
the kitchen and got the flashlight from the pantry. As my hand touched the lock
on the basement door a cold chill ran up my spine. I suddenly felt like I was
thirteen again. Tina saw it in my face, and I saw a streak of panic in hers.
“Don’t worry, there’s two of us,” I stated.
Flipping the lock,
I opened the door. A waft of cigarette smoke hit my nose along with a strange
scent of cheap aftershave, and the odor of some chemical. I turned on the light
and we descended the stairs. As we rounded the stair wall, I thought I heard a
voice say, take care of it, then the
bulb flashed out. Tina and I froze. I switched on the flashlight and the beam
was shaking, then I realized I was shaking. A cold sweat came over me and it
took all my energy to force my steps downward. At the bottom, I angled the
flashlight toward the washer… then down at the floor. It was there, the body.
Tina screamed; I dropped the light, and we both nearly killed each other trying
to be first to the top of the stairs. Once I got into the kitchen, I slammed
the door shut and locked it. Tina was on the phone to the police.
Ten nerve racking minutes passed until the first of
two police cruisers arrived. Sargent Haywood took our statements and two others
went into the basement. They returned shortly after and shrugged their
shoulders. “Nothing down there but a lot of junk,” one said.
The Sargent smiled and nodded at his officer, “You
sure you checked every inch?”
“Honest Sarg, we checked everyplace. There’s nothing
down there that’s alive or dead.” The young officer tipped his hat to me.
“Sorry mam, we didn’t see anything.”
Tina’s face was stern, “We saw a body down there.
Don’t you tell me you didn’t find anything.”
“Perhaps you psyched yourselves out,” the Sargent
stated. “It happens. We get two or three calls a month regarding people seeing
things that just aren’t there. Were you watching anything scary, or
suggestive?”
“No,” I said.
“Okay, keep the basement door locked, and if you hear
anything else down there, call me and I’ll come by,” he handed his card to me.
“I’ll be on duty until nine in the morning.” He tipped his hat and went out
onto the porch.
“Could you leave a car here for a while,” Tina nearly
begged.
“Sure; for a while,” the Sargent said.
We watched them go. Outside the Sargent spoke to one
of his other officers and the fellow went to his car and sat inside. Tina and I
checked throughout the night, and the officer never left the driveway. In the
morning, Tina brought him a cup of coffee. He drank it and left. When she
returned to the house she packed up her things and called a cab. “You should
come with me,” she said.
“I can’t. I promised my folks I’d watch the place
while they’re gone.”
“You’re crazy to stay here after last night,” Tina
stated.
“Are you sure you won’t reconsider?”
“There’s no way I’m staying in that house again.”
Tina’s jaw showed the stress she was feeling.
After she left I prepared my resolve and went back
down into the basement. I replaced the bulb and stood there looking around.
There was nothing to indicate a body, or old clothes, or even justify the loud
bang we’d heard the night before. I shrugged my shoulders and went back up stairs.
For the next five days, I heard no further disturbances.
Six years later, I was working in Los Angeles,
California. I was at work when I got a call from my mother. She was upset, but
not frantic. “The house burnt down last night,” she said.
“Oh my God, what happened?” I stated. “Are you and dad
okay?”
“We’re fine dear. The firemen are going to do an
investigation, but he said it looked like an electrical fire that started in
the basement.”
“The basement?” I was shocked to hear her mention it.
“Your father and I were scheduled to travel to France
in two days. Is there any way we could impose on you to come out here and help
us find a contractor to rebuild the house?”
“You have got to be kidding?” The request was a
surprise. Why me? Couldn’t it wait?
“We’re worried that while we’re gone someone might
fall into the basement. If you could just come out and make sure the contractor
puts up a fence or something…” her voice cracked and I could hear she was on
the verge of tears. “This is so upsetting!”
“I know mom. I’ll get some time off and come out. You
and dad, don’t worry about anything.”
“Thank you my darling. You’re so sweet to do this for
us.”
“That’s because I love you two. I’ll get a flight and
be there on Tuesday. In the meantime, where are you and dad going to be
staying?”
“The Partmore Hotel. Dad got the room this morning.
We’re in room four-fifty-four.”
“Okay, I got it. See you guys on Tuesday.”
I made the arrangements and took two weeks off work.
Once I landed, I got a rental car and drove first to the burnt wreckage of our
old home. There was nothing left of the structure. It looked as if a contractor
had begun to remove the twisted pipes and metal work from the basement. Indeed,
it looked like a burnt hole in the ground. Even though I was shocked to see the
ruins, I chuckled out loud at the thought of the body in the basement. I
remembered how scared I was when I saw it, and how foolish I felt when I
couldn’t find it again.
After checking into my room at the Partmore I found my
parents and we had dinner. We reminisced, and even talked about the body in the
basement. I suggested that they sell the lot, but they insisted on rebuilding.
I asked about the contractor and was surprised to learn that it was Glen
Hobart; a friend of mine from when I attended high school. After dinner we
retired to our rooms and I fell into a deep and dreamless sleep. When the alarm
went off, I was a bit disoriented.
I showered, dressed, and drove over to the house. I
was filled with bitter-sweet nostalgia. As I arrived, I could see men pulling
wreckage out of the basement and piling it up to the side of the foundation.
“Glen!” I shouted. He looked different, older, and a
bit plumper.
“Sheila?” He looked at me as if he was seeing a ghost,
“What brings you here from L.A.?”
I looked at him and gestured toward the basement, “My
parent’s house burnt down,” I said.
He laughed, “Ya, I guess it was a dumb question. I’m
glad to see you,” he added.
“I’m glad to see you too. So, any idea what caused the
fire?”
“The place was a fire hazard. Junk in the basement
pressed against some shorting electrical wires; at least that’s what the Fire
Marshal is suggesting.”
“Hey Glen, come have a look at this!” shouted one of
his workers.
We both went over to the edge and looked down. Around
the charred concrete and rubble, there was a clean area. “What is that,” I asked.
“Looks like another floor,” Glean stated as he climbed
down into the hole. “Bring a couple of picks and a shovel,” he said.
They began clearing away the burnt debris and after a
few minutes it was quite clear that there was clean cement under the burnt
cement. “It looks like someone poured a second layer of cement over the
original floor,” Glen called up to me.
“Holy shit!” a young blond haired man with a shovel stated.
“Look at that.” He was pointing at some blue cloth.
Clearing away the rest of the cement it became clear
there was a body there. The blue cloth turned out to be a suit, and as they
scraped away the debris, a skull and hand bones of a corpse became visible.
“Call the police,” Glen said. “You’d better stay back Sheila for now.”
I called my parents, but there was no answer. I left a
message on their voicemail. The police arrived as did a crime scene truck. They
taped off the area and descended into the basement. I climbed up on my rented car
and could just barely see into the hole. A man was pulling the suit jacket
back. He reached into the pocket and pulled out a leather wallet. Opening it he
gasped and stepped back. “Lieutenant, get over here!” he shouted. “You’re not
going to believe this!”
Three other officers came over, and they too looked
surprised. “My God, who would have thought,” the Lieutenant said. He climbed
from the hole and approached me. “How long did your parents own this house?”
“Forty years maybe,” I said.
“Your parents must have bought it after the body was
buried,” he stated.
“What?”
“That body down there,” he looked as if he was about
to bust open, “is the crime scene of the century.”
“What are you talking about?” I was in little mood for
foolishness at this point.
“The name on the license… it says James Riddle Hoffa!”
To this day my thoughts drift back to the body lying
there, and the police standing around. What did my parents say about this whole
affair? They had little to say on the matter. And, as it turned out, my parents
didn’t travel to France, they actually went to Bolivia. They have a nice house
there, and aren’t planning on coming back.
For More on Lawrence BoarerPitchford:
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Saturday, June 22, 2013
Wicked Webs Poetry Contest Entry, By Stefani Lister (Lu)
If It Were Easy
By: Lu
If it were easy
Anyone could do it.
Thought I had something
But now I see through it
I
I wanted to believe
That this was right for me
That the signs meant
Something
But now I
I'm down on my knees
Begging God please
To get me through
This
If it were easy
Anyone could do it.
Got my hopes up
And they blew away
Things that I know
Things that I need
Are now useless to me.
Please take it all
And give me back my
Dignity
By: Lu
If it were easy
Anyone could do it.
Thought I had something
But now I see through it
I
I wanted to believe
That this was right for me
That the signs meant
Something
But now I
I'm down on my knees
Begging God please
To get me through
This
If it were easy
Anyone could do it.
Got my hopes up
And they blew away
Things that I know
Things that I need
Are now useless to me.
Please take it all
And give me back my
Dignity
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